Luwano's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[My First Friday Flood Drawing]

Not bad, but very smudgy

It's a nice pic, it really is, but you used the smudge tool too much. You should try to draw with a little more definition. I suppose you wanted it to look like an oil painting or something, but I think you've overdone it.

I like the mountain cliff and the sky you did. It's also very smudgy, but apart from that it seems to be ok.

It also gets a little too dark at the bottom of the trees.

Keep it up and I hope to see more from you in the next flood!

[Friday Flood 4]

Soccer? Football!

I appreciate your frosty tribute to the most popular sport of the world. My art teacher once said, that it's hard to draw a convincing football, so kudos to you, because it looks very good.

Only thing I can complain about, is that some of the lines of the net are messed somehow. The top line is vanishing halfway and some of the others are not parallel to the top bar too.

I like it.... a little blank maybe, but I like it.

[Friday Flood]

Impressive work

It looks great. There's not much more I can say.

The strong contrast really suits the image well.

The red of the writing is a little to saturated for me, but I guess that's where nitpicking begins.

Very good job!

Fifty-50 responds:

Thank you. I was going to make this as a postcard for a contest. But I decided not to enter it lol.

[Friday Flood 4]

Welcome to the flood club

Glad to see another art forum reg joining.

As for this piece... it's kinda blurry, but it looks like ice at least.

I hope to see one of your usually much better pieces in the next flood.

Kinsei responds:

:P Thanks for the welcome. I have such horrible time management skills some times and things just get away from me haha...
Anyway, it was suppose to be icicles. I'm not surprised I blew it :P
The next one will be better >:3 much better

[Friday Avalanche]

Nice idea

It's an interesting idea, but I think you could have made more out of this. The snow for example is plain white, which isn't very convincing. You could have added some ups and downs, some little lumps of snow here and there to make it look like real snow.

Also the hand and the foot are pretty small compared to the persons face.

It's a funny idea, but one needs a lot of fantasy to really see the avalanche here. Without the title I would have thought it's simply an unfinished picture.

Too bad, because the eyes, hand and foot themselves look very promising.

[Game Over]

Suggestions to make it look better

Cut off a little of the right and left of the canvas, to reduce the blank space around the title.

Check your spelling. "has fallen victim to a bloodthirsty cannibal tribe".

Probably change or add to the title. "Horror" is too general and a little generic. Maybe "Wild Horror" or even something completely different.

What programs do you use to model the women? And you seem to do the rest in Photoshop, so I recommend: Don't use the grass brush, it's a stencil rather than something drawn by you. People see the grass brush and tend to think you are a noob. But it seems you are not.

Keep it up!