Luwano's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rat with Cheese]

Rad rat & cutting-edge wedge.

SourCherryJack responds:

Damn. Cutting-Edge Wedge. That's good.

[Shepherd]

I like the character design. Very enjoyable color palette too. Not sure about the empty space on the left. Still, a nice piece of work.

tscoct responds:

was too lazy to come up with anything to fill that space, sorry

[Clock Crew]

So good. I enjoy how opulent they are. The shadow line up was a great idea. The clockless versions are also kinda scary in a way. Happy belated clock day!

Merol responds:

Thanks man, it's good to see you still around. Happy Clock Day!!

[FLOOOOOOOOD]

Ay I see the flood. Ferocious raptor you got there. I wish I could read the Captain's name btw. Nice idea to add the "fig. 3" and text like it was an actual historical note. It's just a bit difficult to make out some details here and there. The velociraptor anatomy looks great though.

SourCherryJack responds:

Thank you, Lu. It’s “Fleischer” I figured I’d be remiss if I didn’t throw in some German flair on it. I didn’t have time to really render something out so I figured gotta take as many aesthetic support notes as I could with the “fig 3” and the old notebook look I might just pull it off! Jury’s still out! But also ich bin ein bisschen betrunken

[Art Golem]

Poor squished skeleton-footed abomination on the bottom. Carrying the weight of all this awesome art was to much for him.

I like the individual characters as well as the way you composed the merging. Nice take on the theme, too.

DieterTheuns responds:

Just wait till he visits *your* art portfolio!
Love <3

[And So Once Again The Day Is Saved]

I just came here to plant the pun SourPuffGirls into your mind. You’re welcome.

SourCherryJack responds:

Luwano.

[Commission: Rampage]

I enjoy this drawing a lot. The color scheme works fantastic. I like that you made his head look like a wild animal rather than a too humanized version. Great pose and composition. Good choice on the armor design, the combination of scales and soft fabrics works really well. The little decals on the staff are the icing on the cake. They’re just a small detail, but emphasize the style / design so well.
Very well done!

MellonSnow responds:

Thank you very much! That means a lot!!

[Copper and Gold Chainmail Cross]

I enjoy to see an interesting crafting / smithing submission. The photo setup doesn‘t really present it very well though. My opinion is, that it could help if you posted a few shots from different angles in one pic or one main shot and two or three angles in the comment section. The large empty space doesn‘t help the presentation either.

Other than that, I enjoy the workpiece itself. Chunky crosses work well for medieval jewelry and the fact that it‘s madd from chainmail adds to the charm.

Looking forward to see more of your stuff.

Crazy-Tom responds:

Thank you so much for the critique and advice!! This helps a lot as I’m hella new to Newgrounds! I’ll start prepping some proper photos right away for other pieces

[Inktober day 22: the knight x shetland sheepdog]

This is one of my favourites out of your inktober drawings. Love the armour and the sword designs and that crest on the shield is just hilarious. Been enjoying all your inktober dogs so far. Pulling off the pose and perspective is hard, but you make it look easy.

DantonSlip responds:

Thanks a lot! I'm glad you like this one! I used the weapons designed I made for the day 16 ^^
https://www.dantonslip.com/post/188393686086

[Clock Crew Force]

Dunno how to review this. It's more than a regular piece of pixel art, it's an actual slideshow of pictures. So kudos to you for that smart use of the gif.

I like the individual designs made from combinations of the well executed asset parts. My fave is OrangeClock force.

Happy belated clock day and keep on spreading that clock spirit each year.

ScepterDPinoy responds:

And may their spirits never die.