Luwano's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[L4D - Out of Ammo]

Simply great

I'm not going to list everything I like about this picture, because that would take too long. Her pose is pretty cool and really dynamic. I especially like the idea with the damaged wire mesh fence.

Her shoe looks kinda twisted thought. Judging from her pose it should be turned to the side a bit more. Especially since the tip of the foot seems to point in the correct direction while the upper part with the laces does not.

As usual I like how you draw clothes and different fabrics and also the little details you incorporate in most of your works. Like the "SAB" in the shoe logo. ^^

The title was a great idea. I mean, why should they fight those monsters with baseball bats otherwise?

5/5 & 10/10

Sabtastic responds:

Thanks! In all honesty, I appreciate a good honest critique because they seem to be a lot harder to get. Not a lot of people will really take the time to look for flaws in a picture and notice such small details, so thanks a bunch!! C:

[Bunbun]

Bunny dash!

You did a really good job on our flood icon.

The grass on the left looks does look strange with the ends of your brush strokes peeping out. It looks much better on the right side. Generally the grass is less detailed as the bunny, but that's not a problem here.

The right ear from our view is a little too far to the left, since the bunny's head is pointed directly towards the viewer.

I especially like the way you did the eyes and the fur. Also very good job on the perspective and pose.

J-qb responds:

thanks, Totally agree on all points. The problem I had with this one is that I initially made it as the thumbnail and only later decided to upload it as standalone art. This means stuff that didnt really matter in the thumbnail was now a problem. The perspective was referenced, couldnt get it down without a ref.
Thnaks

[Friday Flood]

Impressive work

It looks great. There's not much more I can say.

The strong contrast really suits the image well.

The red of the writing is a little to saturated for me, but I guess that's where nitpicking begins.

Very good job!

Fifty-50 responds:

Thank you. I was going to make this as a postcard for a contest. But I decided not to enter it lol.

[Friday Flood 4]

Welcome to the flood club

Glad to see another art forum reg joining.

As for this piece... it's kinda blurry, but it looks like ice at least.

I hope to see one of your usually much better pieces in the next flood.

Kinsei responds:

:P Thanks for the welcome. I have such horrible time management skills some times and things just get away from me haha...
Anyway, it was suppose to be icicles. I'm not surprised I blew it :P
The next one will be better >:3 much better

[Fished]

What can I say?

It's simply great.

I can't give much of a useful review here, it's just that I like everthing about this pic.

Especially: the splashing water where the monster comes out of the water, the glowing eyes, the trail the ship leaves behind and the texture of the water.

Occluded responds:

Aw thanks man. I got a lot of good feedback on it before I submitted. So a lot of outside eyes helped me especially with the water. Which took as much time as everything else put together.

[Loloctopus]

Favourite

Was my favourite when I saw the sketch, was my favourite when I saw your WIPs and it is my favourite now that the flood happened.

The whole scene is hilarious, the drawings themselves are great and the crosshatching in particular is awesome.

I love the facial expression!

And in case the cube in the background was really supposed to be a sugar cube, it looks more like an ice cube.

Fifty-50 responds:

Thanks man. You don't know how happy I am right now.