Luwano's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Clockify]

This technology is too advanced- … wait didn‘t we meet before?
Happy clock day!

Little-Rena responds:

Too spoopy!

[Clock Crew Quiz]

Finally a purpose for all the clock lore I studied. Happy clock day!

TotalEmulator responds:

Thanks, i'm happy clock day 2023!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S2Cti12XBw4

[Clock Crew Screensaver]

Thanks for saving my screen! Happy clock day!

fe3l1ngsk1lled responds:

Thank you.

[Newgrounds Winter Worm 2021]

worm

Rhunyc responds:

worm

[Contrast]

Aaaawww sound please.... pretty please

The game you created here (on your own, being the only team-member) for the game jam is awesome. You coped well with the colour handicap and the engine is really fun to play.

It's sad that you couldn't add the sound but I would reaaaaally love to see it with sound someday. You should consider updating it when you get to it.

Adding the ability to run was really a good idea, but when running it is hard to control everything properly. I think you would have been better if the down arrow key was the RUN button, since you use the other three arrows anyway and it's uncomfortable to stretch your hand over to the spacebar from either WASD or the arrows.

Also when I tried to move in circles while running and shooting the char didn't turn anymore. (too many buttons at the same time? :P)

Apart from that it's really fun. I think the ninjas where an awesome idea and the boss fight was pretty hard until you find out how to handle him.

All in all a great entry and if you had had the time to add sound it would have been even better.

Good job!

5/5 & 10/10

JoSilver responds:

Thanks glad you liked it.

when it comes to the spacebar for running I found the spacebar works best, I tryed the down arrow but than it becomes hard to shoot and run. and also yeah there are only so many button pressed flash will pick up sadly (adobe needs to fix it).

I really kinda wanna leave this one as is. I polished it as much as I could and sent it off.

But that does mean I wanna abandon it, I created a pretty complex engine for this game and I wanna experiment more with it.

Also thank for playing.... CONTRAST!!!

[Newgrounds Helpful Guide]

Exact!

First of, I really learned some things here. Nice job on this.
I got a score of 27, a newgrounds regular, what definitely fits. So your calculator really works good. I would like to know if some people complained about their score yet.
The graphics are okay, but there is nothing special, just a NG theme.
You should have mixed the answers a little. The last answer is always the best, this is pretty boring.
And finally, you probably could give out a rating based on your score instead of a page with all ratings. But that's ok too.
Good work 7/10 & 4/5

Sispri responds:

No one complained yet. It seems pretty accurate. Graphics had to be NG themed. :P Next time we will mix the answers. And as of the result page, I thought it would be interesting to see the other rankings too. We'll be making more theme quizzes/guides like this, so look out!

[Clock Crew Creator]

Sorry...not good

Just a simple Drag&Drop Dress-up, nothing special.
No music at all -> fixing this could really improve the votes you get.
The hat is below all bodies. Take it to a higher layer.
Make a invisible clickable area for you play/paly button. Now it looks trashy even if you did it on purpose.
I hope this helps.
Ah...yeah nice bodies but needs more stuff.

Chicken-Bacon responds:

thank you very much i will think about this if i make a sequel :)

[Maze Game - Demo]

Waitin for the full version.

I think this game has potential, but the demo is kinda boring. Maybe it needs to be a little faster, and you could some special features like an item u collect that freezes enemys or an invincibility item. I dont wanna say its bad, just want to give some ideas. And finally........the music is really disturbing, sad but true. Keep it up, im waiting for the full version to see if I was wrong.

n00b-l0s3r responds:

I've been looking everywhere for help making the full version.

Yes I WILL be including 1-Ups.

In the full game I'll also let players toggle music on/off in-game as I noticed too that the Options menu was not enough >:U

Good luck to myself.