Luwano's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Don't Look Back]

That was fantastic

Nice gameplay, nice story AND nice graphics. Honestly, I think this game would be worse with a perfectly drawn hero and creepy enemies. The 4-bit look leaves more space for imagination what is good for your story. For example, it took me a while to realize the ghost was his girl and it was her grave.

And it reminded me of the old games which were entertaining instead of good-looking.

First game? You've gotta be kidding!

5/5

[Orchestrated Death]

More! MORE! MOOOOOORE!!!

I want more .... everybody wants more. Even you yourself want more, trust me. Great idea, nice graphics very addicting gameplay. The most addicting I've seen in a point'n'click to be honest. It would be too short for an ok game, but it's WAY to short for a cool game. The only thing you could probably try is adding alternative killing methods if you should make a sequel. If your not going to, then I'm with risabetch.
....ah yeah 10/10 & 5/5 of course.

[Newgrounds Helpful Guide]

Exact!

First of, I really learned some things here. Nice job on this.
I got a score of 27, a newgrounds regular, what definitely fits. So your calculator really works good. I would like to know if some people complained about their score yet.
The graphics are okay, but there is nothing special, just a NG theme.
You should have mixed the answers a little. The last answer is always the best, this is pretty boring.
And finally, you probably could give out a rating based on your score instead of a page with all ratings. But that's ok too.
Good work 7/10 & 4/5

Sispri responds:

No one complained yet. It seems pretty accurate. Graphics had to be NG themed. :P Next time we will mix the answers. And as of the result page, I thought it would be interesting to see the other rankings too. We'll be making more theme quizzes/guides like this, so look out!

[Sports Liux]

Basic but nice

It's a basic timekiller. It's well done, I like the sports theme and the graphics.
Thanks for the mute button, but it could alternatively use some different bg-music. Even if people like the music, the same song all the time becomes boring. The worst thing about the game is, that columns don't connect if there's a gap. This gives the players more possibilities to plan his moves, which would be useful if one coloumn is high already. Nice game though. 6/10 stars & 3/5 vote.

[Lone Defender]

It reminds me of something.....erm.....

Nice Game. The newspapers were a great idea, but you should inform the users that the "next page" opens a new tab.
Great WW1 setting and atmosphere.
It reminds me a lot of Balloon Invasion. Some of the upgrades are resemblant, the shooting is similar and the big incoming airplanes remind me of the giant grey ballons at Balloon Invasion.
But hey....I love Ballon Invasion, so it's a good thing to have a game that has some things in common with it.
I'm with the others: If you should make a sequel, you could add some more upgrade.
And please keep in mind that people will always demand more upgrades....so don't take it personally. :D

[Clock Crew Creator]

Sorry...not good

Just a simple Drag&Drop Dress-up, nothing special.
No music at all -> fixing this could really improve the votes you get.
The hat is below all bodies. Take it to a higher layer.
Make a invisible clickable area for you play/paly button. Now it looks trashy even if you did it on purpose.
I hope this helps.
Ah...yeah nice bodies but needs more stuff.

Chicken-Bacon responds:

thank you very much i will think about this if i make a sequel :)

[casino roulette game]

Not bad

The game is not bad. Some roulette games have several buttons for different bets. This one keeps it simple, that's good. After each spin you have to wait some seconds, which could get disturbing if you play for a long time.
@reviewers: A roulette game needs a limit. If not there would be a betting system that you can't loose.
But maybe 100$ is a bit to low. You could set the range from 5-500 instead of 1-100. You wants to bet 1$ anyway? :P

[Shrubbery.]

Refreshing

Very addictive and interesting. BUT... there was a glitch when I played against boss #5. I got hit by several enemies and suddenly I was on the bottom of the screen and I could move out of the screen and no enemy could hit me then, then after I went back, let myself hit by many enemies again and was flying to the left I suddenly appeared on top of the screen with the same situation like at the bottom. AND my seeds (and the random seeds from the sky) did not harm the boss while all this was happening (before the first glitch they did). Still a very good game with backgrounds which reminded me a little of Yoshi's Island for SNES / FAMICOM. The music is great for a timekiller game, both relaxing and entertaining, especially one of the piano-pieces. Would have been a 5 & 9 without glitch but still 4 & 7. Hope you can find it and fix it.

[Bloons Player Pack 3]

Hard at the end and it really gets repetive

The levels are quite hard at the end or nasty as ou warned us.
@macegriffin1843 the map by nick248 can be done if you aim for the narrow part with the bouncing walls, theres a lightsaber-bloon which will start the right chain-reaction.
I used the unlimited dart mode for the last 10 or 12 levels. And I hope everybody agrees to hate Kyle Brown who made those hard level :P
I just have a problem with bouncing walls cause you can not say wether the darts bounce forward or back, just luck decides for me most times.
-hard and repetive, -bouncing wall problem, -kyle brown
means 7 stars left total

[AQ Adventurer Maker]

Good game

I liked this game, but there was a bug. I couldnt change faces it changed chest instead. Well but its a good piece of work anyway and completely in AQ style. Even the items you designed yourself. Youre sure you dont work for Artix? lol