Luwano's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[PsychicPeeblz]

I hope PsychicPebble doesn't mind this. :P

I think you could easily improve the art and also the animation part where he bends backwards / falls off his chair. I am saying this cause I know you can draw better. lol

For me it was a bit hard to understand what he said at first, I had to restart the movie and turn sound up to get it.

I like they idea and I think the "youtube reviews" were kinda funny. Maybe show them for one or two more seconds.

[Sbc gets a smash ball]

Oh hey, hey oh

This is actually kinda well animated.

It's a little short thus the lowered score.

You should definitely try to make something longer based on this.

Happy belated Clock Day again, since my original review was lost in the deletion spree.

[Elite Beat Agents R GOLD!]

Stupid dance! Yay!

Really, the stupid dance is the winner in this flash. The animation is ok, the voiceacting is funny (even though there's a static noise sometimes).

The whole idea that they are selling themselves for this stuff is funny.

[Romanon Voice test]

Not bad....

You do the different voices kinda good. They suit the corresponding character well and are funny too. The sound quality for Verda is horrible though. You should get a pop filter to get rid of those noises the plosives are causing. You know like "p" "t" sounds and so on.

Overall the sound quality ain't perfect, but still one can understand everything.

The characters look interesting, hopefully we see some flash movies with the, soon and not only tests. ;)

Keep it up!

[The Man Who Cant Be Moved]

Wonderful....

It's not perfect in terms of animation and or drawing, but it's still very good. And you may know yourself that there are some minor flaws. However all that is negligible compared to the dynamic, the emotions and everything else, that is just soooo great.

It's an amazing music video and as far as I know there's no official music video for the song yet. This would be a great choice for sure.

You managed to accompany the songs story with beautiful and meaningful pictures. And you don't need to understand the lyrics (for those in the world who don't speak english) to see and feel what the song is about.

It's heart-touching!

5/5 & 10/10

waiyan responds:

:) wow thanks. yes my animation needs a lot more work :) i'll try to improve in future projects :D

[Buxley's Sadness]

Don't worry about the character

You shouldn't worry too much if your character resembles another one. Almost everything good has been done before and as long as you don't actually copy or rip-off things it's fine.

The animation is quite short, so instead of submitting it as it is, you should animate more scenes about Buxley's sadness and submit them as one.

I like the character, he looks very interesting and has got potential for some good stories.

I think you know yourself, that your animations still need to improve, but they are not bad at all. They WILL get better sooner or later so just keep em coming.

As mentioned before the scene is way too short, thus the low score.
I'd like to see more.

Ashmic responds:

thanks for such a nice comment, lol i just joined and i already have people chewin my ass off, haha, anyways thanks for the nice critisism XD i'll look into what you said <3 thank you

[Link's Barrel Beat]

That's hilarious

That's really funny. The drawings are nice, perfect Zelda style. It kept me entertained for some minutes, that's for sure.

I wonder what changes throughout the loops. I could only tell something happening during the first time through.

10/10 & 5/5

[A Newgrounds Christmas]

Very funny!!!

I really like the whole movie.

The gags are hilariously funny and the drawings are great. I laughed throughout the whole movie.

The angry faic christmas baubles looked fantastic, Tom and his crew should sell some in the store next year. ^^

Jazza responds:

YOUR THE FIRST to notice/mention the baubles. thank you! i love them. i was thinking, NG should make them and sell them in the store and it's kill over christmas.

[the Last of the Dashkin]

Finally....

....after two years, Adam, seeing Bitey on the frontpage of Newgrounds again made my heart beat faster (yeah, I know it's just a flash ^^).

The animation is great as usual, the music is great as usual and even though I love the humor of the former Brackenwood-movies, the seriousness of this movie, makes it so much better. But you need to know the other episodes nevertheless, or at least you need to know Bitey to understand how epic this flash is.

Emma Reynolds has a perfect voice for this kind of narration. How do you find such a rarity? I hope to hear more of her in the future.

As I see you have fixed the flash, so it doesn't show gray background anymore. I'm glad you could fix it.

4 weeks? 4 WEEKS?! Dude.... you're superhuman.

Great work as usual but on a even higher level, because of the story.

I could go on with compliments forever, but let me explain it this way: Seeing your Brackenwood animations makes me feel like a child again.

5/5 & 10/10

[Uscm Vs Aliens : Outbreak]

Not bad....

The movie is good, but it's not great yet. It needs some refinement to achieve a real good score.

I don't know what framerate you used, but it looks like you should use a higher one and make the movements more fluid.

The voiceacting is not good in my opinion.
For example: If you need to record a scream, then move the mic away and actually scream. It sounds strange if someone "pretends to scream" while in fact is careful not to be too loud. I mean the part where one soldier shoots the aliens and screams "Oh yeah you want sum?...."

The gunfire sounds are loud enough while I can't hardly hear the talking sometimes.

You should stop the movie from looping, an easy way to make your movie look more professional.

The drawings are ok, I really like how you did the face-melting from the alien blood.

I think you could really make a very good movie out of this, with a little more detailed drawings and some fixes on the audio. Keep it up!